The Burden of Your First Five Pages
Noah Lukeman, in his book The First Five Pages (published in 2000), says “Over the years I’ve read thousands of manuscripts, all, unbelievably, with the exact same type of mistakes. … Writers are doing...
View ArticleHow Fiction Writers Can Manipulate Time
Time is a fluid thing in our lives. It’s all about perception. That’s why it’s “timey-wimey,” as Dr. Who likes to say.Ah, time. That nebulous, illusory, slippery thing. Just what is time, anyway? As...
View ArticleHow Fiction Writers Can “Speed Up” Time
Last post I discussed ways fiction writers can manipulate time. Meaning, give the illusion that, for the POV character (and for the reader), time seems to be speeding up or dragging. Writers can...
View ArticleHow Fiction Writers Can Create “Skewed Time”
Time sometimes seems choppy, erratic, confusing. It may feel as if it’s going backwards or in circles. It all depends on perception. Making time feel wonky is a skill, but there are ways to create...
View ArticleThe Power of Perspective in Creating Characters
Post by Marie Barry. As writers, we are constantly thinking about the lens through which our characters view the world. We’re often told to “walk in someone else’s shoes” or to “climb into his skin and...
View Article5 Lessons I Learned from My 30-Day Writing Challenge
Guest post by Grace Ekause. Embarking on a 30-day writing challenge seemed exciting at first—it was a chance to improve my creativity, build a writing habit, and watch my skills grow into something...
View ArticleHow to Master the Passage of Time in Fiction
We’re continuing our look at manipulating time in fiction. Be sure to read the other posts on the topic, beginning with this one. Scene structure is an essential concept writers must grasp in order to...
View ArticleContinuity in the Passage of Time
We’ve been going over the element of time in many recent posts (start with this one). Time is a matter of perception, and fiction writers need to learn skills to help them become adept in conveying the...
View ArticleThe Best Way to “Show, Don’t Tell”–Scene Segmenting
One of the key maxims in fiction writing is “Show, don’t tell.” But just telling a writer to “show” is vague. How do you transfer the clearly enacted scene playing in your mind to the page in a way...
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